Pre-production and Mise-en-Scene of my Film Opening
- wire string
- clothing apron
- money
- extra shirt
FADE IN
BLACK SCREEN
Sound of water rippling
TITLE: THE RIPPLE EFFECT
WRITTEN BY:
EDITED BY:
CINEMATOGRAPHY BY:
EXT: CITY PLAZA- EARLY MORNING
The sunlight beams on a very busy plaza. In the center of the plaza sits a beautiful wishing well that water ripples and is home to many coins.
A TEEN GIRL is seen sitting at the fountain staring at the water and suddenly, A HAND grabs A COIN out of the wishing well.
CUT TO:
EXT. PLAZA SIDEWALK- CONTINUOUS
The same HAND now holds the PENNY as she is walking towards the plaza’s COFFEE SHOP.
INT. COFFEE SHOP CONTINUOUS
Claire dumps everything inside her purse into the counter causing chaos. A pile of COINS, CRUMPLED RECEIPTS, and a few DOLLAR BILLS scatter across the surface.
Claire gathers all of the money counting under her breath and she pulls the penny out of her back pocket, pulls out the PENNY, and places it on top of the pile of money.
She exhales
CLAIRE
(relieved)
Just enough.
She smiles then begins to laugh anxiously.
INT. COFFEE SHOP-MOMENTS LATER
Claire waits for her coffee order and eventually receives her order from the BARISTA.
She smiles, then takes a sip of her coffee as she realizes that her coffee was made WAY TOO BLACK.
She approaches the counter again
CLAIRE
Excuse me, my order is wrong, I wanted it to be-
Claire WATCH BUZZES LOUDLY with an alert reminding her that she needs to go shopping for groceries.
CLAIRE
The groceries--
Claire freezes
CLAIRE
Never mind
Claire proceeds to walk out of the coffee shop in a hurry and as she approaches a GUY in front of her, he rudely bumps into her HARD without saying anything.
EXT. OUTSIDE COFFEE SHOP-SIDEWALK- CONTINUOUS
Clara RUNS to car
INT. INSIDE CLAIRES CAR CONTINUOUS
Claire gets into the car as she sets her coffee down and begins to reverse out her parking spot.
She eventually reaches the grocery store, and Claire is seen walking out into the store.
EXT. GROCERY STORE-PARKING LOT-LATER
Claire gets out of the car and runs into the entrance of the store
INT. INSIDE GROCERY STORE-CONTINUOUS
Claire looks at a very crumble grocery list
She searches shelf after shelf
Empty
She proceeds to find the items on the list
She shakes her head out of frustration
Claire finally finds something that she needs – a bottle of sauce
She looks at the price
CLAIRE
(disbelief)
5 dollars? That is too much!
After debating whether she wants to get the sauce bottle she finally decides to get it but just before she reaches to grab the bottle
But another HAND GRABS IT FIRST.
Claire freezes
Claire stares in disbelief
Before she can react, her phone RINGS LOUDLY, an obnoxious ringtone echoing through the aisle.
She checks the screen
GRANDMA
Claire answers quickly
CLAIRE
I’m on my way!!
She hangs up and runs out of the store
EXT. GROCERY SORE-PARKING LOT- MOMENTS LATER
Claire runs as she looks for her car
She pauses
Her parking space is EMPTY
CLAIRE
Where is my car!






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