Second update of film opening



 My group decided to all edit individual film openings then we would watch all the videos and combine our ideas. We have officially finished editing. We just have to combine our ideas. We also have worked on finding the perfect instrumental music. We finished our final shot list and updated our film opening script. We are currently working on the movie poster and a look book for film opening. I will upload of my group members editing version.  We are considering using instrumental music for the film opening. 

Sidney's version:



Jackie (me) version :





Dereck's version:

Emma's version :



Instrumental music ideas:

-violin playing
-piano playing


Updated script:

Film opening:

The ripple effect

 

Coming- of- age dramatic comedy

 

By: Emma Urbaneja, Dereck Joanis, Jacqueline Cruz, and Sydney Wright.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

FADE IN.

BLACK SCREEN

Sound of water rippling

EXT: CITY PLAZA- EARLY MORNING

The sunlight beams on a very busy plaza. In the center of the plaza sits a beautiful wishing well that water ripples and is home to many coins.

A TEEN GIRL is seen sitting at the fountain staring off to the side, when suddenly she turns around and sticks her hand into the fountain.

CUT TO:

The same HAND now takes her hand out of the fountain to show a PENNY, shaking her head as if to say that's right. And walks away from the fountain showing that she is done with business here.

INT. TITLE SEQUENCE APPEARS IN THE RIPPLES OF THE WATTER OF THE FOUNTAIN

-THE RIPPLE EFFECT

FADE IN-STORMY SKY

PAN. Claire is walking towards a smoothie shop

 

INT. SMOOTHIE SHOP CONTINUOUS

Walking into the shop, Claire confidently goes right up to the counter, grabbing her drink without addressing the barista. She walks away, just to look over to the tip jar and place a penny into it. Showing her opinion of the quality of the establishment.

EXT. SMOOTHIE SHOP

She walks out of the coffee shop without much thought of her actions.

INT. PLAZA WALKWAY

JUMPCUT- As Claire is walking, she pulls out a grocery list

INT. GROCERY LIST

·      1 Bage of White Bread

·      1 dozen Box of Donuts

·      Wheel of Cheese

·      2 Boxes of pasta

·      Strawberry Smoothie (Checked Off)

As she is reading the items to herself, she doesn’t the STRANGER walk in front of her distracted by his phone. And they collide, causing CLAIRE to dump her smoothie on her black tank top.

CLAIRE:

What the heck dude!?

(She says angrily)

 

She says as she turns around to face the STRANGER.

 

STRANGER

Watch where you are going.

With a big huff Claire returns to the walking in the same direction she was originally going, the store. Just to notice, her grocery list is missing. She stops and looks around just to see her grocery list lying on the floor a few feet away. When she goes to grab the grocery list, it flies away. Claire, now running to go to get the grocery list.

CLAIRE:

Wait a minute! Wait a minute!

(She yells)

INT. SIDEWALK NEXT TO ROAD

Claire is now on a chase to get her grocery list, as it is taken by the wind it leads her into a parking lot where it lands right next to the front tires of a blackish-grey car.

INT. PARKING LOT

Claire bends down, grabbing the grocery list and shaking it with a bit of aggression.

CLAIRE:

Finally.

(She says, sounding exhausted from her run)

 Walking backward as she is about to turn away from the parking lot, she gets hit by a car door. Some DRIVER hit her as they were getting out of their car, causing CLAIRE to go flying onto the asphalt ground, now sitting on the ground. The two stare at each other for a second in confusion.

DRIVER

My bad

Claire gets up from the ground as the DRIVER walks away. And is clearly, made from her day of misfortune.

 

Claire

This day has just been awful

INT. ZOOM INTO PENNY

FADE TO. BLACK

 

CREDITS:

WRITTEN BY:

Jacqueline Cruz

EDITED BY:

Jacqueline Cruz

Dereck Joanis

CINEMATOGRAPHY BY:

Sydney Wright

Dereck Joanis

DIRECTED BY:

Emma Urbaneja

Jacqueline Cruz

ACTORS:

         Claire Jone            Emma Urbaneja

Rude Stranger #1           Dereck Joanis   

                              Rude Stranger #2          Sydney Wright                                 

                                   

 

 

 


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